My english is bad and i bet you know it too.. [:

please bear with it.

The story is actuaally really nice if you really have the heart to read this O-MY-GOD-so-long essay down there. If i got the mood to write it too.. :x

Rapunzel Parody Version (which I love so much more than the original)

Introduction :

Black Sorcerer (Man)

Rapunzel ( A man too, kinda shocked huh? I am when i first read this.. ._.)

Prince

Mentioned :

Lord Mage ( Rumored a good and kind mage)

Instruction :

' conversation '

Once upon a time, in a village, there's a black sorcerer that fond of living alone, far away form the village. Then, one day, a pregnant woman ask her poor husband to bring her a lettuce. Their family is so poor that they can't even afford any food at all but because the husband wanted her wife to be happy, so he say with a smile ' Of course, I will definitely bring you one'. He search and search for in the forest, village, begged, anything he can but he can't find or get a lettuce. And so, he came across a small cabin, with a garden of lettuces that his wife wished to have, he looked around to see if the owner was there. No one was seen and so he thought that maybe this is a good time for him to steal just one lettuce for his wife.

Once he was inside, he plucked a lettuce and planned to silently leave there but he was caught red-handed by the owner. In the husband fear, it was the rumored black sorcerer! The husband begged for mercy, saying his wife is pregnant to and wish to eat this lettuce. Thus the black sorcerer, just out of whim said, 'I will give you the lettuce but you must hand over your child after he/she was born'. Never did the sorcerer would had thought that the husband was actually agreed on the condition. For a sorcerer, once what is said and was agreed upon, must be fulfilled. What a silly man.

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Few years later, Rapunzel was already 9 years old. He was born with a beautiful blond color hair, glittering under the sunshine, a boy that was envied by girls. He had that very bright smile and loved his parents dearly. But one day, a man dressed in black abducted Rapunzel when Rapunzel was chased by a little demon in the forest. It was the black sorcerer, taking back what he deserved.Very soon, Rapunzel woke up from his nap and found himself in a very dark room. Where am i? Its so dark. Father? Mother? Everyone? In fear, Rapunzel's trying to reach out his hand, hoping to grab anything, anything at all, and suddenly, a window opened. In Rapunzel surprised, he look outside the window and found himself inside a very tall, seemed to be isolated from the outside world, a tower. A voice suddenly said 'Will you do me a favor? Stop bawling on me. If there's anything I hate, its brat who cry.' Looking at the sorcerer, stunned, surprised, mesmerized, by the sorcerer beauty, a very dark long hair, a skin color as if the color of the morning sun color, and a figure that was beyond the beauty of the world, there stand the magnificent sorcerer. Little does Rapunzel know that the man who he think so beautifully is a black sorcerer that was feared by villagers and said this 'Do you happen to be the Lord Mage?'

To the black sorcerer surprise, he was just called a Lord Mage? Rapunzel continue 'You're the Lord Mage aren't you? Mages use all sort of magic and different from other people. i read that in a book' (I think he thought he was the Lord Mage because the Black sorcerer look so beautiful) 'The forest down there is the demon forest right? Mother said that a terrible black sorcerer there' Without any time to reply, the sorcerer thought No, that's me. 'I was chase by a little demon down near the forest. Oh.. That well, I sent after you. 'But I cant remember what happened after that. Well of course not. Since I found you and knocked you out. 'Lord Mage, you saved me and bring me here, didn't you? Thank you!' Rapunzel said that with a smile. For a black sorcerer, having this kind of talk really make him lost words and so he stayed silent and thought what happen before Rapunzel was kidnapped here.

Please! My Child! Give me back my child! ( this is Rapunzel's mother screams when Rapunzel were abducted in front of her eyes, begging to give Rapunzel back, in the Black Sorcerer's reminisce) You were kidnapped, you know? So you've got the complete wrong idea about me. 'But I have to go home. Father and mother, they must be worried.' the black sorcerer was shocked hearing that after the sudden silent. Who would let you go back just like that? The black sorcerer finally make reply 'Your parents? They aren't here anymore, aren't they?' In Rapunzel misunderstanding 'What?!' Not knowing that the sorcerer continue 'Since the demons in the forest are so scary, they might have run away somewhere.' Rapunzel was shocked upon hearing that, unknowingly making the face as if he were to cry. Damn. He's going to cry. ''uh no,' irritated ' It's all right. This tower is really stands out, so someday for sure, your parents will realize that you're here and come get you so until then, stay here, Rapunzel.' Hearing the black sorcerer called his name, Rapunzel asked 'How do you know my name? Mother said not to tell anyone.' The black sorcerer, amused 'ahh, I wonder how.' Because I gave you that name --- as a sign. You're my replacement for my Rapunzel lettuce.

The black sorcerer show Rapunzel around the tower. Nothing really worth to mention. A room for Rapunzel to sleep, things on the shelves that can't be touch, and the black sorcerer room not to go in, and a door that, not matter what, not to open it. According to the black sorcerer, there was stairs that led to downstair. But demons had settle there and if you ever step neyond the door, you will be devoured. Rapunzel was shocked and sad, knowing himself can't go back to his parents' side. After the long talk, the black sorcerer say that he will be going out and thus while he was going to open the "forbidden door", in a dash Rapunzel ran toward the door, refined the black sorcerer to open the door. To the black sorcerer's surprised, thinking that Rapunzel have the intention to run away, asked Rapunzel to move out of the way or the door won't open. Rapunzel, with the voice almost cracking up as if he was to cry, say 'But, if you open the door, behind this door there are a lot of demons right? Lord mage, you will be hurt! You can't! It's dangerous to go this way!' For the very first time the black sorcerer heard this kind of talk, he couldn't really respond. Shocked yet uneasy, telling Rapunzel that he will be fine and to Rapunzel own conclusion, because he's Lord Mage that he won't get harm, the black sorcerer just go along with it. Those demons behind the door is actually that black sorcerer's pet.

TO BE CONTINUE--

My english is bad and i bet you know it too.. [:

please bear with it.

The story is actuaally really nice if you really have the heart to read this O-MY-GOD-so-long essay down there. If i got the mood to write it too.. :x

Rapunzel Parody Version (which I love so much more than the original)

Introduction :

Black Sorcerer (Man)

Rapunzel ( A man too, kinda shocked huh? I am when i first read this.. ._.)

Prince

Mentioned :

Lord Mage ( Rumored a good and kind mage)

Instruction :

' conversation '

Once upon a time, in a village, there's a black sorcerer that fond of living alone, far away form the village. Then, one day, a pregnant woman ask her poor husband to bring her a lettuce. Their family is so poor that they can't even afford any food at all but because the husband wanted her wife to be happy, so he say with a smile ' Of course, I will definitely bring you one'. He search and search for in the forest, village, begged, anything he can but he can't find or get a lettuce. And so, he came across a small cabin, with a garden of lettuces that his wife wished to have, he looked around to see if the owner was there. No one was seen and so he thought that maybe this is a good time for him to steal just one lettuce for his wife.

Once he was inside, he plucked a lettuce and planned to silently leave there but he was caught red-handed by the owner. In the husband fear, it was the rumored black sorcerer! The husband begged for mercy, saying his wife is pregnant to and wish to eat this lettuce. Thus the black sorcerer, just out of whim said, 'I will give you the lettuce but you must hand over your child after he/she was born'. Never did the sorcerer would had thought that the husband was actually agreed on the condition. For a sorcerer, once what is said and was agreed upon, must be fulfilled. What a silly man.

----

Few years later, Rapunzel was already 9 years old. He was born with a beautiful blond color hair, glittering under the sunshine, a boy that was envied by girls. He had that very bright smile and loved his parents dearly. But one day, a man dressed in black abducted Rapunzel when Rapunzel was chased by a little demon in the forest. It was the black sorcerer, taking back what he deserved.Very soon, Rapunzel woke up from his nap and found himself in a very dark room. Where am i? Its so dark. Father? Mother? Everyone? In fear, Rapunzel's trying to reach out his hand, hoping to grab anything, anything at all, and suddenly, a window opened. In Rapunzel surprised, he look outside the window and found himself inside a very tall, seemed to be isolated from the outside world, a tower. A voice suddenly said 'Will you do me a favor? Stop bawling on me. If there's anything I hate, its brat who cry.' Looking at the sorcerer, stunned, surprised, mesmerized, by the sorcerer beauty, a very dark long hair, a skin color as if the color of the morning sun color, and a figure that was beyond the beauty of the world, there stand the magnificent sorcerer. Little does Rapunzel know that the man who he think so beautifully is a black sorcerer that was feared by villagers and said this 'Do you happen to be the Lord Mage?'

To the black sorcerer surprise, he was just called a Lord Mage? Rapunzel continue 'You're the Lord Mage aren't you? Mages use all sort of magic and different from other people. i read that in a book' (I think he thought he was the Lord Mage because the Black sorcerer look so beautiful) 'The forest down there is the demon forest right? Mother said that a terrible black sorcerer there' Without any time to reply, the sorcerer thought No, that's me. 'I was chase by a little demon down near the forest. Oh.. That well, I sent after you. 'But I cant remember what happened after that. Well of course not. Since I found you and knocked you out. 'Lord Mage, you saved me and bring me here, didn't you? Thank you!' Rapunzel said that with a smile. For a black sorcerer, having this kind of talk really make him lost words and so he stayed silent and thought what happen before Rapunzel was kidnapped here.

Please! My Child! Give me back my child! ( this is Rapunzel's mother screams when Rapunzel were abducted in front of her eyes, begging to give Rapunzel back, in the Black Sorcerer's reminisce) You were kidnapped, you know? So you've got the complete wrong idea about me. 'But I have to go home. Father and mother, they must be worried.' the black sorcerer was shocked hearing that after the sudden silent. Who would let you go back just like that? The black sorcerer finally make reply 'Your parents? They aren't here anymore, aren't they?' In Rapunzel misunderstanding 'What?!' Not knowing that the sorcerer continue 'Since the demons in the forest are so scary, they might have run away somewhere.' Rapunzel was shocked upon hearing that, unknowingly making the face as if he were to cry. Damn. He's going to cry. ''uh no,' irritated ' It's all right. This tower is really stands out, so someday for sure, your parents will realize that you're here and come get you so until then, stay here, Rapunzel.' Hearing the black sorcerer called his name, Rapunzel asked 'How do you know my name? Mother said not to tell anyone.' The black sorcerer, amused 'ahh, I wonder how.' Because I gave you that name --- as a sign. You're my replacement for my Rapunzel lettuce.

The black sorcerer show Rapunzel around the tower. Nothing really worth to mention. A room for Rapunzel to sleep, things on the shelves that can't be touch, and the black sorcerer room not to go in, and a door that, not matter what, not to open it. According to the black sorcerer, there was stairs that led to downstair. But demons had settle there and if you ever step neyond the door, you will be devoured. Rapunzel was shocked and sad, knowing himself can't go back to his parents' side. After the long talk, the black sorcerer say that he will be going out and thus while he was going to open the "forbidden door", in a dash Rapunzel ran toward the door, refined the black sorcerer to open the door. To the black sorcerer's surprised, thinking that Rapunzel have the intention to run away, asked Rapunzel to move out of the way or the door won't open. Rapunzel, with the voice almost cracking up as if he was to cry, say 'But, if you open the door, behind this door there are a lot of demons right? Lord mage, you will be hurt! You can't! It's dangerous to go this way!' For the very first time the black sorcerer heard this kind of talk, he couldn't really respond. Shocked yet uneasy, telling Rapunzel that he will be fine and to Rapunzel own conclusion, because he's Lord Mage that he won't get harm, the black sorcerer just go along with it. Those demons behind the door is actually that black sorcerer's pet.

TO BE CONTINUE--